The draft that I have created has plenty of detail which has been collected from various sources to provide a some what unbiased article. This dedication to stay on the fence around the argument is a writing style I tried to maintain throughout the article. One of the main problems with the facts was the fact that they weren't localised for the UK. This didn't help the defending music piracy side to the argument too much.
Celebrity opinions are also mentioned at least for a bit in one of the paragraphs being for and one being against music piracy. The article's sourced information was embedded well into the text. Also, the quotes from the celebrities are well chosen and sink into the paragraph well
The structure is relatively simple with it being made up of an intro into music piracy, two paragraphs for supporting music piracy and two paragraphs against music piracy. Then following is celebrity opinions and an overall summary. I feel that it works for what it is and gives the review a solid structure.
The main problems that I find with it are the layout decisions as the page looks quite bear. The main picture is good but there hasn't been anything much done about areas like the title to make it stand out. Also the logo is shabby and the the quotes on the main images were pretty rushed. Apart from that the enlarged quotes in parts of the article are a great way to lead the audience into reading the article.
Overall, I feel a good amount of work has been done on the article in most of the different respects but there should have been more time that was invested in the layout and presentation of the spread.
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